Sugar
Over
the past decade, thanks largely to the enormous changes of health, an
increasing number of people are concerned about the fitness of students.
Although some people claim that students should have a choice in what
they drink in school’s cafeteria, I, however strongly believe that school
cafeterias should stop selling soft drinks and other high-sugar drinks.
Stop drinking soft drinks
and other high-sugar drinks is a reasonable choice for students to keep their
body in a good shape. The primary reason for this is that there are some students
in our school are really unhealthy and fat because they drink a lot of
high-sugar drinks every day and they never do any sports. The way to solve this
problem is to drink more water instead of drinking high-sugar soft drinks and
do some sports in that it makes them healthy.
This can be best
illustrated with the example of my best friend Tommy Wang. Tommy has been my
friend since primary school, we know each other for a very long time. When he
was in fifth grade, he was a very fat and unhealthy boy in his class because he
liked drinking high-sugar soft drinks, such as Coke, Sprite, and Fanta and so
on. All of his classmates laughed at him and made fun of him which made him
very depressed. After that, he aspired to reduce his fat by drinking more
waters than other drinks. He started to not buy soft drinks from the cafeteria
in the school. He made a plan that he needed to drink 5 bottles of water and do
some exercise every day. By virtue of doing that, he became really strong and
fit, all his classmates changed their altitude to him. Now he is one of my
healthiest and strongest friends. Similar examples abound, evidently revealing
that high-sugar soft drinks are harmful for one’s health. students in the
school need to control themselves to not drink soft drinks is a good vehicle
for them to keep their health.
To sum up, though the
advantages of that students
should have a choice in what they drink in school’s cafeteria enjoys
are considerable, they cannot compete with the benefits that school cafeterias
should stop selling soft drinks and other high-sugar drinks brings about, when health
is taken into consideration.
You have done a great job on this blog. Great introduction and use of examples to support your argument. Awesome! Next, you know what I am going to say: PLEASE PROOFREAD AND CORRECT.17/20
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